Act One, Chapter One: 03

1st Sep 4:00 AM, 2012 in Act One: Chapter One
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Act One, Chapter One: 03
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AbigailBrooks 26th Jul 6:21 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
...You don't know want to know how my brain first read this page. You really don't. But yes, so now we're getting names and hints of personality. Sweethearts Virtue and Claude and a horse named sweet. I like that your women characters actually look like real women, with the curves and all. I appreciate that so much.
sheshallnotbenameless 19th Aug 9:41 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
I love how even Virtue looks sneaky and snarky in one panel. Such a great family dynamic. Also, this time around I really notice how Beauty didn't jump in the conversation. She's told in the previous page to come away from the window, like a child. This page shows how much Virtue and...was it Patience? connect with each other, perhaps due to their age. Beauty is sort of the oddball out, perhaps accounting for her deep connection with her father.
candybeads 11th Jan 6:59 PM, 2017 edit delete reply
Going back through the archives again. I can never seem to remember all of Argus' backstory. If I may say, you've definitely improved. The shadows here seem almost flat compared to the newest pages.
MsMegan 11th Jan 9:03 PM, 2017 edit delete reply
I guess it's good to hear that four years haven't been a total waste! I can't even bear to look at any of the early stuff.