Act One, Chapter One: 11

1st Sep 4:00 AM, 2012 in Act One: Chapter One
Act One, Chapter One: 11
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The Doodler 3rd Dec 1:44 PM, 2012
The Doodler
This whole page is beautiful.
AbigailBrooks 28th Jul 3:15 PM, 2013
You know what I really love about this page? It makes it clear that in this version of the story, the sisters made those requests jokingly. Their father offered to get them whatever they'd like if all went well, but they basically told him not to worry about it. They understand their situation and aren't greedy. I really like that.
sheshallnotbenameless 19th Aug 10:14 PM, 2013
I never understand how artists manage to make a panel look so exactly the same when it's a moment like in the bottom of the page, where there are two panels of the same moment to emphasize a point. I mean, everything looks like it was copy-and-pasted somehow, but you drew it, right? I see this in manga as well. It's just--how do you do the thing? D:

Aside from my incredulity over the sheer magic artists like yourself seem to wield, I love how the only thing that moves in the bottom two panel is the water dripping from the bag, showing movement. You could've easily just left the markings of water where they were in the previous panel, but nope. You deserve all the gold stars in the world and then some.
MsMegan 19th Aug 10:46 PM, 2013
Gosh, you ARE analyzing! Looking at this early artwork (actually, looking at ANY of the artwork more than a day after I draw it) makes me wince something awful. I owe my Sweetie some thanks on this page. He suggested the camera angle on the bottom panels.