Act one, Chapter Three: 19

7th Feb 11:00 PM, 2013 in Act One: Chapter Three
Act one, Chapter Three: 19
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AbigailBrooks 7th Feb 11:11 PM, 2013
Oh...dear, that is not good. That is not good at all. While Mama (forgive me, her name escapes me) has great balance, I'm not sure she can stay on the boat with that great wave crashing down on it. Similarly, I can easily see Beauty getting washed off the side. Definitely not good! And Beauty, I'd be scared too!

Little Notes: Mama's face in the fourth panel looks a bit like a scarecrow to me - very unsettling. There's also a really nice sense of movement to this. Your storyboarding skills are showing! ;) You mentioned that I should take notes on what I like seeing in my favorite comics, so this would be a page to keep in mind.

In any case, I'm looking forward to the next update!

cattservant 7th Feb 11:40 PM, 2013
Self preservation
Handfast with the clever child.

Storm is Consuming!
Lostariel 8th Feb 11:59 AM, 2013
I LOVE the artwork!
Stitchlingbelle 8th Feb 12:41 PM, 2013
I love that the sound of the rain looks almost like Beauty's crying for her father under her breath.
a Drop of Beauty 9th Feb 1:19 AM, 2013
a Drop of Beauty
RosesnWater 11th Feb 3:23 AM, 2013
What an interesting dream... at least aI assume it's a dream or a memory fro the past, very cool XD
I'm still very curious what happened in the beginning though, with the girl in the bed.... I wonder how that all ties into this
Kim M 15th Feb 4:20 PM, 2013
...And now that we've wee Beauty with her mother, I'm wondering if this is more memory than dream. Perhaps a forgotten one? In any case, I love the sense of motion in this page---the wind, the waves. Excellent.
AbigailBrooks 29th Jul 1:21 PM, 2013
I'm fairly convinced this was how Beauty became deathly ill in the first place. And Elise looks /especially creepy/ in that fourth panel - more like a scarecrow than a person, thanks to the face. Eeesh. (Shudders.)
sheshallnotbenameless 25th Aug 11:31 AM, 2013
I remember just eating this page up when you first posted it, though I became obsessive with refreshing the page soon enough in the off chance you may have posted an update early. I didn't see it until AbigailBrooks pointed it out, but Elise really does look like one freaky scarecrow in that panel. I love the current of horror that's nearly palpable in this page.