Act One, Chapter One: 04

1st Sep 4:00 AM, 2012 in Act One: Chapter One
Act One, Chapter One: 04
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Dyl 11th Dec 1:30 AM, 2012
I can't wait for the next update!
AbigailBrooks 26th Jul 6:43 PM, 2013
Deep in the winter, a tinge of adventure. Also, we learn the snarky sister's name: Temperance, aka the sister who likes horses better than men. But not in that way - only one sister in this family will be falling for a beast. ;)
MsMegan 26th Jul 8:55 PM, 2013
You don't know that! might know that.

Fun fact: Temperance at one point did have her own subplot concerning a romance, but it got cut because it had nothing to add to the story and was only there because I like Temperance.

Also, it is really hurting me to look at these old pages. Geeze. I've come along way in a year.
AbigailBrooks 31st Jul 4:31 PM, 2013
You really have come a long way; the character designs seem to be much smoother now, for one thing. As I said later on, I'd be interested in seeing a side story with Temperance someday (I like her too)! That could be a lot of fun.
candybeads 11th Jan 6:06 PM, 2017
Temperance is always such a fun character. I'm going to try critiquing the art on the pages, Ms. Megan, as I make my way back through the archive. This page has a good flow to it, but Beauty could be larger in the last panel to keep the visuals more focused. The inclusion of the smoking chimneys is a nice touch. They seem to represent the sisters wanting to keep her safe.
sheshallnotbenameless 19th Aug 9:47 PM, 2013
TEMPERANCE! That's her name. Not Patience. Ignore that bit in my last comment then. >//<

I like how, while both the top and bottom panels show a snowy night, with the bottom panel there seems so much more light with the cabin, the large snowflakes, and Beauty, almost as if Beauty's a beacon of hope?